Last week we were talking about the following topic:Does travel broaden your mind?after we talked and discussed we recorded the following MP3 with our personal opinion:
My mistakes were:
*Abroaden->broaden
*Travel->travelling
*Meet cultures ->find cultures
*Another->other
*Best people like you->people who are better than you
*Not only with the Money also The way of being a person->not only talking about Money also talking about being a better person
*And transform you into a best person->and change you into a better person.
*Yes,another types of ways of living->another ways of living
*Yes,it’s a way of entertainment and enjoying->yes,it’s a way of entertainment and enjoyment
*Yes,it’s a all positive way of being a best person->yes,it’s an all positive way of being a better person.
*I think it’s better for you,and..->I think It’s the best for you
The mistakes I noticed first were the wrong phrases not the gramatical mistakes
Tuesday 22 April 2008
Monday 21 April 2008
letter to a friend
Dear Juan,
I’m writing in order to invite you to a terrific holiday in the quiet of the Lake District.
It is an wonderful Spring weekend with fully qualified instructors teaching you how to climb or go sailing and swimming in the lakes.If you don’t like swimming because the water might be too cold , you can walk because there are plenty of places in the full of life and nature area.
You can also go to the nearby town that has all facilities including very interesting museums with a lot of dinosaurs and bones to see and a lot more!.Althought it might be cold you can go to the heated indoor swimming pool in the town so you will enjoy it a lot.Furthermore you can go to the biggest supermarkets in the country and buy hundreds of things.
Talking about accomodation ,we’ll stay in comfortable and heated Wood cabins that are situated in the quiet of the forest where the peace and life leads.
Finally,the price of this fantastic holiday is only $150 between four so I think it is like a gift.The only bad point is that you must buy you food but that doesn’t matter because you can buy it in the supermarkets at the near town.
Well,I hope you agree to go with me.That’s all for now.I’m looking forward to seeing you in the holiday.
Best wishes
Franco
I’m writing in order to invite you to a terrific holiday in the quiet of the Lake District.
It is an wonderful Spring weekend with fully qualified instructors teaching you how to climb or go sailing and swimming in the lakes.If you don’t like swimming because the water might be too cold , you can walk because there are plenty of places in the full of life and nature area.
You can also go to the nearby town that has all facilities including very interesting museums with a lot of dinosaurs and bones to see and a lot more!.Althought it might be cold you can go to the heated indoor swimming pool in the town so you will enjoy it a lot.Furthermore you can go to the biggest supermarkets in the country and buy hundreds of things.
Talking about accomodation ,we’ll stay in comfortable and heated Wood cabins that are situated in the quiet of the forest where the peace and life leads.
Finally,the price of this fantastic holiday is only $150 between four so I think it is like a gift.The only bad point is that you must buy you food but that doesn’t matter because you can buy it in the supermarkets at the near town.
Well,I hope you agree to go with me.That’s all for now.I’m looking forward to seeing you in the holiday.
Best wishes
Franco
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